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My future life.... by Javiera.

In 5 years late(ww), in the future. I think that the entire world was(wt) different, political, social, and economic changes(mw). And so, I believe that in 5 years I’ll like to be working like a geographer, in ministry’s exterior relation(ww). But I’ll like so much living in another country, with other work(ww), maybe in Europe, Asia, Oceania, or in any continent. I love will(wo) travel for(ww) the world, sound really funny, but also in 5 years I’m(wt) 26 years ago(ww), this is time to start to have(wt) a family. Get married with someone, I don’t think so, but it’s an ideal time for have(wf) children.An idea now, is buy(wt) a department(ww) with my boyfriend, but (mw)both didn’t had(wt) time to see (mw)department(ww) in the centre(ww) of Santiago. So only that I have are(wf) my parent’s house in Santiago, and a country house in Loncopangue (VIII region).This is my idea. That is all.
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The magnificent Rio de Janeiro! by Maira.

Around the world (mw)have a lot of places than(ww) I would like (wf)knowing, but the first for me would be Rio de Janeiro!I would like visiting this place because I think (mw)is very interesting and entertaining. The(nn) people here are dancing every day the samba(wo) and they would teach me your(ww) traditional dance, and I would dance in the “Carnaval of Rio” and we would drink Caipiriñas!Also, this city has beautiful beach(sp) and (mw)have warm water. In this place I would swim and sunbathing and I come(wt) back to my country with a perfect tan. One example is Copacabana beach, famous by (mw)4 km beach.In Rio I would visit the Cristo Redentor too, an international popular figure of Cristo located in the top of the Corcovado hill.In general, this place always takes my attention. Casually I signed up to participate in a contest for a trip for(ww) 5 friends and I (mw)to Rio de Janerio today. If I will be winner(wf) I would travel in December to this place, I hope this. It would be a great prize for my work during this year. Why(ww) people come with me to Rio? That’s real problem. I don’t know why(ww) I choose. May be(sp) I w(sp) be(ww) a sweepstakes whit(sp) my friends favourites(wo). It would be a(sp) unforgettable trip!
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Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION WF= WRONG FORM.