Abbreviations:
WW=WRONG WORD
WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
NN=NOT NEEDED
P=PUNCTUATION
martes 14 de octubre de 2008
Damn spring!!
Is allergy or flu? I don’t know really(wo), but I feel this from started by(wo)(ww) the damn spring!. Most people think than8ww) the spring is the best season of the year, but I disagree with theirs(ww), I hate the spring.What’s the reason? Ok, here is the argument:First:(p) the changeSp) of temperature. All days we don’t know how are the day: cold, cloudy or sunny. Also the meteorologists are very liars(sp), so they’re wrong with the forecasts and (mw)cause colds. I don’t know whether (mw)coat or not! Really bad =/Second: A lot of plants produce pollen that is spread (mw)everywhere. The air is infected by fluff and we breathe all day, causing sneeze after sneeze.Well…not all is bad. The birds sing and the horary change to the summer time is good. Otherwise good is the 16 October(wo) day. What’s happen(sp) that day? (mw)Is a really important date…..My birthday! =D
Thursday, 23 October 2008
Stoneheage...a great mistery!!!
Stonehenge is one of the prehistoric monuments that guards(ww) (mw)major mystery.
This work is a monument of ancient times, is an enormous mass of rocks, visibly tidy that is located in Great Britain, specifically near Amesbury in Wiltshir. This wonder of the world, set of rocks put of form circular(wo) and composed of wood, which until today does not allow to have a clear certainty of which it was the objetive8sp) of this work.
It is(ww) believed that Stonehenge was a center of worship where their purpose(sp) was to realize(ww) religious activities, others believe that this one was a sector led to a funereal(ww) temple, in alone(ww) where certain persons, (of major importance) were dismissed here.
Another theory suggest(sp9 that the aimwas(sp) rather astronomic, that is to say with this(wo)(nn) they realized celebrations for the summer solstice, where they could know since they would be the crops of every year, this according to what I have seen in National Geographic Channel or Discovery Channel.
The certain only thing(wo)(nn)of all this is that Stonehenge exceeds many architectural and astronomic current works, due to the mysticism, greatness and knowledge of the realized(ww) ones of this monument made for(nn) thousands of years ago.
martes 14 de octubre de 2008
My favorite piece of technology.
Well(p) my favorite piece technology is the labtop(sp), because (mw)is very important for the student of universities(wo) (in my case for example(wo)) and (mw)is a tool work(wt). I had my first ladtop(ww) two year(sp) ago, when my mother bought a labtop(sp) second hand(wo), but for my(ww) it was the best… I do(wt) not care the labtop was second hand(wo).I use(wt) the labtop(sp) In(p) my house, sometime(sp) I carry (mw)to (mw)universities and my mother use the labtop(sp) when she make(ww) your(ww) tesis(sp) of magister, and for last my father use(mw) only to check your(ww) email(sp).In my personal case(p) I use (mw)labtop(sp) every day because in my house (mw)is my computer, I do not have a desktop,(p) my little brother have the old desktop. Jajaja.I like many thing(nn) the my(ww) labtop(sp), I can listen(wt) my music in many place(sp), I have all (mw)pictures the(ww) my travels, I can work in the universities or in the house of my friend(wo) or classmate(sp), and I can connected(wt) to internet in any place.Mmm it is a difficult questions(sp) because this piece is my favorite (mw)about the(nn) technology, but I think that my life (mw)not changed (mw)much, my life would will(nn) be the same… but I(ww) was(ww9 arrange very much my time (wo).
Wednesday, 29 October 2008
Thursday, 23 October 2008
Billy buried Kes......Now, he has New hopes.
Billy buried Kes. Suddenly, he felt that his life had to change.
When he faced his mother, all the feelings that he had hidden, appeared. He told her that she was absent, that all her life had been a constant chaos. He determined to left home and to explore the world that has been his real home. His brother had died in his mind. In fact, Billy had assumed that terrible situation, but he knew that Kes was living in his thoughts as a great friend and as a motivational element to face difficulties.
Billy grew up. He was eighteen, working in an old shoe factory that was dissapearing too. He wanted to train knaves, he wanted to share with those birds, he wanted to be free. At the end of the day, he came back to his house. His girl was waiting for him, with a great dinner. They were proud of themselves, they were happy.
One Sunday morning in the park, Billy and his girl were walking around, when something appeared in front of Billy. In the top of a tree, a beautiful, young and perfect knave was waiting for its prey. Billy look at it, and his mind travelled to his childhood. He understood that it was a great episode in his life, but at the same time, it was sad, depressing and enough. That was .....but now his life had to be with his girl and his new objective, his new little purpose, who was coming too. Now, he has new hopes.
Wednesday, 8 October 2008
Corrections than by myself
Wednesday, 4 June 2008
The Pietá
An important piece of art in my life is an sculpture. It is called " The Pietá" by Michelangelo. This is a piece of art that represents the Renaissance. It has the body of Jesus on the lap of his mother Mary(p) after the Crucifixion.
The first time I saw it(P) was in my grandma´s house. She had an art book which contained pictures of the most famous pieces of art in human history. Besides, I had an important religious influence from her to analyse the Bible and Jesus life(P)for that reason(P) I was so impressed with it.
When I saw this sculpture in the picture, I was fascinated, because it was a perfect representation of Jesus and Mary, from my point of view(WO). I was 8 years old, and I couldn´t understand how Michelangelo had done it.
The Pietá is a fantastic and almost perfect representation of humanity anf(SP) history, it is an incomparable piece of art.
ERROR CORRECTION ACTIVITIES
Through these corrections activities, I have been progressing and advancing in noticing my own errors or mistakes. This process of correcting people´s posts has been positive and effective in the purpose of identifying and learning how to observe students writing and their common mistakes. The idea of correcting through blogs is a dynamic and technological tools to apply on students learning. Besides, they love to write and giving opinions, students are avid of interaction and participation, and ths mechanism is effective when there is participation and commitment.
Students who have been corrected, appreciate the feedback that we gave them. Students and future teachers are part of a dual process, in which both are important, in terms of how both can help to each other to learn and advance. This idea of sharing experiences has been benefitial for both parts, but we have learnt more about correcting mistakes, respecting people´s ideas and how those mistakes are not more important than the content. I mean, the form can not be more important than people´s thoughts. As a future teacher, I have to consider do not affect their free writing, their dreams.
Wednesday, 1 October 2008
NEW CORRECTIONS
Abbreviations:
WW=WRONG WORD
WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
NN=NOT NEEDED
P=PUNCTUATION
lunes 1 de septiembre de 2008
My future.
Well, I think that in five years later(ww) I am will work(wt) in the government, and I hope work(wt) in political(ww) of the environments(wo). But I think that in five year(sp) from now I will start to work, because I have many plans before star to work.In the personality(ww) I am(nn) hope very good, and I would like to have a stable relationship,(p) in addition I hope (wt)have my thinking clear about my professional and personality(ww) life. I think that in five year later(ww) I live in Santiago, but I would like living(wt) in Vina del Mar, because y(ww) think this city is a good place for living, also I think that Vina is a(nn) just (mw)city for my(ww), this city it is not a biggest, but it is not a city very small(wo). Well, my ideal future would be to finish my career and(mw) once post grade in foreign, and (mw)work with a good salary, and living with my girlfriend in the(ww) apartment. I know that this ideal future is difficult, but I therefore(ww) for this.
Tuesday, 9 September 2008
Desert cities are living on borrowed(ww) time
The entire world is meeting(ww) affected by diverse phenomena that in a few years, will bring consequences you would be(wt).
The countries (p)that according to the United Nations will meet(ww) more affected will be those of the Middle East and some US's cities.
It is believed(ww) also that the deserts will be good at the future, overcoat(ww) for the(nn) Solar energy and the (nn) Electricity.
lunes 25 de agosto de 2008
Learning English: My experience
My English experience started in the(nn) primary school. I don’t remember the name of my first teacher (p)because she was a short time with us and after (mw)she went to another place than(ww) I did not know. I remember my second teacher. She was with us about five or six years and in my opinion she was really bad!! She (mw)called “Mireya” (horrible name) and she slept(ww) in class! Your(ww) class was very boring then I always got up from the chair and I talked with my classmates . This(ww) was the reason for my poor performance in high school. I had bad notes(ww), and I didn’t like this language. I didn’t have dimension(ww) about the important(ww) of the English Language until I started the University. From the first year of Geography(p) the(nn) teachers delivered us English text(sp) and this were(wt) really difficult for me. Now(p) I enjoy(wt) learning and I think than I’m good student. I practice in my free time with friends. We talked(wt), listened(wt) English songs and after (mw)we translate. I think than(ww) I progress every day and I hope learner(wt) more and more in the future. About the English culture I don’t know (mw)much, because I don’t have English friends and I don’t know English-(ww)speaking people. May be(sp) if I will travel for(ww) nations when the(nn) people speak English I learned(wt) (sm)complete this language. But I don’t have money so(sp) I need study(wt) and practice here, because English is very useful for me and I think than(ww) at this moment (sm)for all the professions in this globalizing(wt) world
WW=WRONG WORD
WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
NN=NOT NEEDED
P=PUNCTUATION
lunes 1 de septiembre de 2008
My future.
Well, I think that in five years later(ww) I am will work(wt) in the government, and I hope work(wt) in political(ww) of the environments(wo). But I think that in five year(sp) from now I will start to work, because I have many plans before star to work.In the personality(ww) I am(nn) hope very good, and I would like to have a stable relationship,(p) in addition I hope (wt)have my thinking clear about my professional and personality(ww) life. I think that in five year later(ww) I live in Santiago, but I would like living(wt) in Vina del Mar, because y(ww) think this city is a good place for living, also I think that Vina is a(nn) just (mw)city for my(ww), this city it is not a biggest, but it is not a city very small(wo). Well, my ideal future would be to finish my career and(mw) once post grade in foreign, and (mw)work with a good salary, and living with my girlfriend in the(ww) apartment. I know that this ideal future is difficult, but I therefore(ww) for this.
Tuesday, 9 September 2008
Desert cities are living on borrowed(ww) time
The entire world is meeting(ww) affected by diverse phenomena that in a few years, will bring consequences you would be(wt).
The countries (p)that according to the United Nations will meet(ww) more affected will be those of the Middle East and some US's cities.
It is believed(ww) also that the deserts will be good at the future, overcoat(ww) for the(nn) Solar energy and the (nn) Electricity.
lunes 25 de agosto de 2008
Learning English: My experience
My English experience started in the(nn) primary school. I don’t remember the name of my first teacher (p)because she was a short time with us and after (mw)she went to another place than(ww) I did not know. I remember my second teacher. She was with us about five or six years and in my opinion she was really bad!! She (mw)called “Mireya” (horrible name) and she slept(ww) in class! Your(ww) class was very boring then I always got up from the chair and I talked with my classmates . This(ww) was the reason for my poor performance in high school. I had bad notes(ww), and I didn’t like this language. I didn’t have dimension(ww) about the important(ww) of the English Language until I started the University. From the first year of Geography(p) the(nn) teachers delivered us English text(sp) and this were(wt) really difficult for me. Now(p) I enjoy(wt) learning and I think than I’m good student. I practice in my free time with friends. We talked(wt), listened(wt) English songs and after (mw)we translate. I think than(ww) I progress every day and I hope learner(wt) more and more in the future. About the English culture I don’t know (mw)much, because I don’t have English friends and I don’t know English-(ww)speaking people. May be(sp) if I will travel for(ww) nations when the(nn) people speak English I learned(wt) (sm)complete this language. But I don’t have money so(sp) I need study(wt) and practice here, because English is very useful for me and I think than(ww) at this moment (sm)for all the professions in this globalizing(wt) world
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