NEW CORRECTIONS

Abbreviations:

WW=WRONG WORD
WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
NN=NOT NEEDED
P=PUNCTUATION

lunes 1 de septiembre de 2008

My future.
Well, I think that in five years later(ww) I am will work(wt) in the government, and I hope work(wt) in political(ww) of the environments(wo). But I think that in five year(sp) from now I will start to work, because I have many plans before star to work.In the personality(ww) I am(nn) hope very good, and I would like to have a stable relationship,(p) in addition I hope (wt)have my thinking clear about my professional and personality(ww) life. I think that in five year later(ww) I live in Santiago, but I would like living(wt) in Vina del Mar, because y(ww) think this city is a good place for living, also I think that Vina is a(nn) just (mw)city for my(ww), this city it is not a biggest, but it is not a city very small(wo). Well, my ideal future would be to finish my career and(mw) once post grade in foreign, and (mw)work with a good salary, and living with my girlfriend in the(ww) apartment. I know that this ideal future is difficult, but I therefore(ww) for this.

Tuesday, 9 September 2008

Desert cities are living on borrowed(ww) time
The entire world is meeting(ww) affected by diverse phenomena that in a few years, will bring consequences you would be(wt).
The countries (p)that according to the United Nations will meet(ww) more affected will be those of the Middle East and some US's cities.
It is believed(ww) also that the deserts will be good at the future, overcoat(ww) for the(nn) Solar energy and the (nn) Electricity.

lunes 25 de agosto de 2008

Learning English: My experience

My English experience started in the(nn) primary school. I don’t remember the name of my first teacher (p)because she was a short time with us and after (mw)she went to another place than(ww) I did not know. I remember my second teacher. She was with us about five or six years and in my opinion she was really bad!! She (mw)called “Mireya” (horrible name) and she slept(ww) in class! Your(ww) class was very boring then I always got up from the chair and I talked with my classmates . This(ww) was the reason for my poor performance in high school. I had bad notes(ww), and I didn’t like this language. I didn’t have dimension(ww) about the important(ww) of the English Language until I started the University. From the first year of Geography(p) the(nn) teachers delivered us English text(sp) and this were(wt) really difficult for me. Now(p) I enjoy(wt) learning and I think than I’m good student. I practice in my free time with friends. We talked(wt), listened(wt) English songs and after (mw)we translate. I think than(ww) I progress every day and I hope learner(wt) more and more in the future. About the English culture I don’t know (mw)much, because I don’t have English friends and I don’t know English-(ww)speaking people. May be(sp) if I will travel for(ww) nations when the(nn) people speak English I learned(wt) (sm)complete this language. But I don’t have money so(sp) I need study(wt) and practice here, because English is very useful for me and I think than(ww) at this moment (sm)for all the professions in this globalizing(wt) world