Students´ error correction.

Abbreviations:

WW=WRONG WORD
WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
NN=NOT NEEDED
P=PUNCTUATION

martes 14 de octubre de 2008

Damn spring!!
Is allergy or flu? I don’t know really(wo), but I feel this from started by(wo)(ww) the damn spring!. Most people think than8ww) the spring is the best season of the year, but I disagree with theirs(ww), I hate the spring.What’s the reason? Ok, here is the argument:First:(p) the changeSp) of temperature. All days we don’t know how are the day: cold, cloudy or sunny. Also the meteorologists are very liars(sp), so they’re wrong with the forecasts and (mw)cause colds. I don’t know whether (mw)coat or not! Really bad =/Second: A lot of plants produce pollen that is spread (mw)everywhere. The air is infected by fluff and we breathe all day, causing sneeze after sneeze.Well…not all is bad. The birds sing and the horary change to the summer time is good. Otherwise good is the 16 October(wo) day. What’s happen(sp) that day? (mw)Is a really important date…..My birthday! =D


Thursday, 23 October 2008

Stoneheage...a great mistery!!!
Stonehenge is one of the prehistoric monuments that guards(ww) (mw)major mystery.
This work is a monument of ancient times, is an enormous mass of rocks, visibly tidy that is located in Great Britain, specifically near Amesbury in Wiltshir. This wonder of the world, set of rocks put of form circular(wo) and composed of wood, which until today does not allow to have a clear certainty of which it was the objetive8sp) of this work.
It is(ww) believed that Stonehenge was a center of worship where their purpose(sp) was to realize(ww) religious activities, others believe that this one was a sector led to a funereal(ww) temple, in alone(ww) where certain persons, (of major importance) were dismissed here.
Another theory suggest(sp9 that the aimwas(sp) rather astronomic, that is to say with this(wo)(nn) they realized celebrations for the summer solstice, where they could know since they would be the crops of every year, this according to what I have seen in National Geographic Channel or Discovery Channel.
The certain only thing(wo)(nn)of all this is that Stonehenge exceeds many architectural and astronomic current works, due to the mysticism, greatness and knowledge of the realized(ww) ones of this monument made for(nn) thousands of years ago.


martes 14 de octubre de 2008

My favorite piece of technology.
Well(p) my favorite piece technology is the labtop(sp), because (mw)is very important for the student of universities(wo) (in my case for example(wo)) and (mw)is a tool work(wt). I had my first ladtop(ww) two year(sp) ago, when my mother bought a labtop(sp) second hand(wo), but for my(ww) it was the best… I do(wt) not care the labtop was second hand(wo).I use(wt) the labtop(sp) In(p) my house, sometime(sp) I carry (mw)to (mw)universities and my mother use the labtop(sp) when she make(ww) your(ww) tesis(sp) of magister, and for last my father use(mw) only to check your(ww) email(sp).In my personal case(p) I use (mw)labtop(sp) every day because in my house (mw)is my computer, I do not have a desktop,(p) my little brother have the old desktop. Jajaja.I like many thing(nn) the my(ww) labtop(sp), I can listen(wt) my music in many place(sp), I have all (mw)pictures the(ww) my travels, I can work in the universities or in the house of my friend(wo) or classmate(sp), and I can connected(wt) to internet in any place.Mmm it is a difficult questions(sp) because this piece is my favorite (mw)about the(nn) technology, but I think that my life (mw)not changed (mw)much, my life would will(nn) be the same… but I(ww) was(ww9 arrange very much my time (wo).