Monday, 3 November 2008
My Photograph by Javiera.
The photograph that I like(wt) had(wt)takes(wt) it(ww) in(nn) this summer, in February when I was in(ww) my vacations with my family, a friend and my boyfriend. This photo show(wt) to my boyfriend (Alex) and me, it was really difficult (mw)took it, because Alex put the camera in a small branch of a tree with (mw) slope in the terrain and programmed the camera, and so he run to me in a few seconds. It was really funny! The place is called Lagoon El barco, (mw)a(ww) beautiful place very difficult to arrive(mw). In the photograph also(nn) you can see the lagoon, the Cordillera de los Andes, only a few meters (Argentina is really close(ww) to this place), and ancient beautiful(wo) trees called Araucarias, witch(sp) it(nn) lives with originals(sp) peoples(sp), the Pehuenches. I like this photograph because (mw) is a beautiful image, with green, blue, and a lot of colours,(p)which combined I like it(nn). Also because I’m with Alex, and he like(wt) it(nn) this photo too. He put the photograph in a photo frame in his bedroom and another (mw)in his office. All the people who see the photo in his office asked (mw) if the woman in the photo is his girlfriend (me).
domingo 9 de noviembre de 2008
A photograph I like by Maira.
I love the photography. I think than(ww) I will be photographer because this profession I like(wo) so(ww) much. I think all photos are important, because this(ww) represent one(ww) special moment.I have a lot(mw) favorites(sp) photos. I like my photos or than (nn)take(nn) other person(mw). But(nn) in this last time I like so much take pictures(wo)(mw) to my little niece. She(ww) name is Renata and she was(wt) one year old. I like (mw) take pictures to her because she is a very photogenic baby. She look(wt) very beautiful in all (mw)photos and she like(wt) so much when I take photos from(ww) her(wo).This photography was in our last September 18(mw). The place is Algarrobo, a beautiful beach nearly(sp) to Santiago. Renata is(wt) located(mw) specifically in a(ww) games located inside the enclosure where we are staying. All days in the afternoon we went whit(sp) her to this(ww) games because she played here and knew other babies too.In this photography, we can see your(ww) beautiful smile (always we(wo) look there, because she is very happy) and I choose this photography for this reason. Also, her smile shows her little white teeth and your(ww) eyes show very(ww) emotions.I hope than(ww) it(ww) photo like (mw)too!!
Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION
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