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Tuesday, 21 October 2008

A funny film by Javiera.

A funny film, for me is the Ice Age 1,(p) I laughed a lot with this movie.
The first time that I saw it, maybe it was 3 or 4 years ago. Actually I don’t remember when I saw the movie. Also, (mw)always put(ww) the movie in (mw)cable television, and I see it.
The first time I saw it, I was in my house with my mother. Both saw this film, in Movie City channel;(p) I think that my brother was there too. It’s a funny movie, for enjoy(wt) with your family.
The story is about three animals, a sabertooth tiger, a sloth, and a mammoth. The name of the first is Diego, the next(ww) is Sid, and the mammoth is Manfred, but Sid called (mw)Manny. Many and Sid found a human baby, they called (mw)“Bodoque”, and they saw when the saber-toothed tiger attacks(wt),(p) the human tribe, and the mother of this baby ran away with him. And so, Many and Sid took the boy and star(wt) a history for(ww) found his father. After Many and Sid took the baby, Diego joined them in this trip, and so this is the start (ww)of this group like a family or “flock”(Manada in spanish).
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lunes 24 de noviembre de 2008

A GOOD MAGAZINE! Maira

Dear friends, today I recommend an interesting magazine than(ww) I read all Sundays. It(ww) magazine is about the(nn) home & decoration. I read it because I like the(nn) architecture and design, so I (mw)take(wt) good ideas and (mw)plan the house of my dreams. Also, here appear(sp) beautiful landscapes when(ww) the(nn) people build wonderful houses (mw)far (mw)of the pollution and density(ww) cities.
The house of my dreams is big and far of(ww) Santiago. This would have beautiful gardens too, when(ww) my pets and children’s(sp) are(wt) play every day. Also, near the house will be necessary(nn) a pool, because I love swim(wt). The place of(ww) build (mw)I don’t decide(wt) yet, but I prefer the south of Chile. The style of architecture than(ww) I prefer for a house is a(nn) type(nn) in harmony with the environment. For example, if I live in a forest, I would like a house of natural wood(wo). Also, in this magazine appear(sp) (mw) interview of important architects and design(sp) persons(nn), when(ww) they talk about new ways of constructing(ww). Sometimes appear(nn) (mw) offers (mw)very interesting too(ww), and my mum and I(ww) running(wt) to its(ww).Well, for all the(ww) reasons I like this magazine, and I hope than(ww) you read (mw)too.
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Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION WF= WRONG FORM.