My future life.... by Javiera.
In 5 years late(ww), in the future. I think that the entire world was(wt) different, political, social, and economic changes(mw). And so, I believe that in 5 years I’ll like to be working like a geographer, in ministry’s exterior relation(ww). But I’ll like so much living in another country, with other work(ww), maybe in Europe, Asia, Oceania, or in any continent. I love will(wo) travel for(ww) the world, sound really funny, but also in 5 years I’m(wt) 26 years ago(ww), this is time to start to have(wt) a family. Get married with someone, I don’t think so, but it’s an ideal time for have(wf) children.An idea now, is buy(wt) a department(ww) with my boyfriend, but (mw)both didn’t had(wt) time to see (mw)department(ww) in the centre(ww) of Santiago. So only that I have are(wf) my parent’s house in Santiago, and a country house in Loncopangue (VIII region).This is my idea. That is all.
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The magnificent Rio de Janeiro! by Maira.
Around the world (mw)have a lot of places than(ww) I would like (wf)knowing, but the first for me would be Rio de Janeiro!I would like visiting this place because I think (mw)is very interesting and entertaining. The(nn) people here are dancing every day the samba(wo) and they would teach me your(ww) traditional dance, and I would dance in the “Carnaval of Rio” and we would drink Caipiriñas!Also, this city has beautiful beach(sp) and (mw)have warm water. In this place I would swim and sunbathing and I come(wt) back to my country with a perfect tan. One example is Copacabana beach, famous by (mw)4 km beach.In Rio I would visit the Cristo Redentor too, an international popular figure of Cristo located in the top of the Corcovado hill.In general, this place always takes my attention. Casually I signed up to participate in a contest for a trip for(ww) 5 friends and I (mw)to Rio de Janerio today. If I will be winner(wf) I would travel in December to this place, I hope this. It would be a great prize for my work during this year. Why(ww) people come with me to Rio? That’s real problem. I don’t know why(ww) I choose. May be(sp) I w(sp) be(ww) a sweepstakes whit(sp) my friends favourites(wo). It would be a(sp) unforgettable trip!
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Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION WF= WRONG FORM.
Tuesday, 9 December 2008
Saturday, 29 November 2008
Error correction.
Tuesday, 21 October 2008
A funny film by Javiera.
A funny film, for me is the Ice Age 1,(p) I laughed a lot with this movie.
The first time that I saw it, maybe it was 3 or 4 years ago. Actually I don’t remember when I saw the movie. Also, (mw)always put(ww) the movie in (mw)cable television, and I see it.
The first time I saw it, I was in my house with my mother. Both saw this film, in Movie City channel;(p) I think that my brother was there too. It’s a funny movie, for enjoy(wt) with your family.
The story is about three animals, a sabertooth tiger, a sloth, and a mammoth. The name of the first is Diego, the next(ww) is Sid, and the mammoth is Manfred, but Sid called (mw)Manny. Many and Sid found a human baby, they called (mw)“Bodoque”, and they saw when the saber-toothed tiger attacks(wt),(p) the human tribe, and the mother of this baby ran away with him. And so, Many and Sid took the boy and star(wt) a history for(ww) found his father. After Many and Sid took the baby, Diego joined them in this trip, and so this is the start (ww)of this group like a family or “flock”(Manada in spanish).
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lunes 24 de noviembre de 2008
A GOOD MAGAZINE! Maira
Dear friends, today I recommend an interesting magazine than(ww) I read all Sundays. It(ww) magazine is about the(nn) home & decoration. I read it because I like the(nn) architecture and design, so I (mw)take(wt) good ideas and (mw)plan the house of my dreams. Also, here appear(sp) beautiful landscapes when(ww) the(nn) people build wonderful houses (mw)far (mw)of the pollution and density(ww) cities.
The house of my dreams is big and far of(ww) Santiago. This would have beautiful gardens too, when(ww) my pets and children’s(sp) are(wt) play every day. Also, near the house will be necessary(nn) a pool, because I love swim(wt). The place of(ww) build (mw)I don’t decide(wt) yet, but I prefer the south of Chile. The style of architecture than(ww) I prefer for a house is a(nn) type(nn) in harmony with the environment. For example, if I live in a forest, I would like a house of natural wood(wo). Also, in this magazine appear(sp) (mw) interview of important architects and design(sp) persons(nn), when(ww) they talk about new ways of constructing(ww). Sometimes appear(nn) (mw) offers (mw)very interesting too(ww), and my mum and I(ww) running(wt) to its(ww).Well, for all the(ww) reasons I like this magazine, and I hope than(ww) you read (mw)too.
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Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION WF= WRONG FORM.
A funny film by Javiera.
A funny film, for me is the Ice Age 1,(p) I laughed a lot with this movie.
The first time that I saw it, maybe it was 3 or 4 years ago. Actually I don’t remember when I saw the movie. Also, (mw)always put(ww) the movie in (mw)cable television, and I see it.
The first time I saw it, I was in my house with my mother. Both saw this film, in Movie City channel;(p) I think that my brother was there too. It’s a funny movie, for enjoy(wt) with your family.
The story is about three animals, a sabertooth tiger, a sloth, and a mammoth. The name of the first is Diego, the next(ww) is Sid, and the mammoth is Manfred, but Sid called (mw)Manny. Many and Sid found a human baby, they called (mw)“Bodoque”, and they saw when the saber-toothed tiger attacks(wt),(p) the human tribe, and the mother of this baby ran away with him. And so, Many and Sid took the boy and star(wt) a history for(ww) found his father. After Many and Sid took the baby, Diego joined them in this trip, and so this is the start (ww)of this group like a family or “flock”(Manada in spanish).
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lunes 24 de noviembre de 2008
A GOOD MAGAZINE! Maira
Dear friends, today I recommend an interesting magazine than(ww) I read all Sundays. It(ww) magazine is about the(nn) home & decoration. I read it because I like the(nn) architecture and design, so I (mw)take(wt) good ideas and (mw)plan the house of my dreams. Also, here appear(sp) beautiful landscapes when(ww) the(nn) people build wonderful houses (mw)far (mw)of the pollution and density(ww) cities.
The house of my dreams is big and far of(ww) Santiago. This would have beautiful gardens too, when(ww) my pets and children’s(sp) are(wt) play every day. Also, near the house will be necessary(nn) a pool, because I love swim(wt). The place of(ww) build (mw)I don’t decide(wt) yet, but I prefer the south of Chile. The style of architecture than(ww) I prefer for a house is a(nn) type(nn) in harmony with the environment. For example, if I live in a forest, I would like a house of natural wood(wo). Also, in this magazine appear(sp) (mw) interview of important architects and design(sp) persons(nn), when(ww) they talk about new ways of constructing(ww). Sometimes appear(nn) (mw) offers (mw)very interesting too(ww), and my mum and I(ww) running(wt) to its(ww).Well, for all the(ww) reasons I like this magazine, and I hope than(ww) you read (mw)too.
Publicado por mairita figue en 8:06 0 comentarios
Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION WF= WRONG FORM.
Monday, 24 November 2008
Error correction. Javiera and Maira.
Friday, 24 October 2008
A letter... Javiera.
Hello George:I (mw) write to you, because you are my Trainee Teacher and Simon,(p) has asked us (mw)make(ww) a feedback with each Trainee.The only thing I know is that you study English Pedagogy at Alberto Hurtado University in fourth year too, and you(sp) name is Jorge. But about you life and don’t know anything(wo). For example how is you(sp) life? Or what is(ww) you hobbies? Do you drink? ¿ what is your favourite drink? Do you have (mw)girlfriend? What is you age?(wf) I don’t know, you can tell me a lot of things about you. That is the idea.When you corrected my blog, you was(ww) very clear, you tell(wt) me what kind of wrongs(ww) I had and you suggest(wt) me a few of(nn) things that I need(wt). Thank you for that thing.In the error correction activity, you tell(wt) me only in(nn) a little comment, but you didn’t correct me(nn) my post. You don’t worry(wo).And so,(nn) thank you for all, and regards for you.Bye.
domingo 26 de octubre de 2008
A letter to you!!!! Maira.
George:I(wf) writing to(nn) you because Simon is a really creative person, so he thought in an activity: we write(wt) to our Trainee Teacher and ask (mw)some personal thinks(sp).Really(wo), he had reason(ww). I don’t know anything about you. I will(ww) like (mw)know you more. My first question is: Is George you really(ww) name? Are you translating Jorge? Well, I think that your name is Jorge but why (mw) you change it? ijiji How old are you? Do you have (mw) hobbies? Do you have girlfriend?About you carer(sp), I will (ww)be(nn) know how (mw)you decide (mw)study English Pedagogy? How is your experience in that carer(sp)?I read in your blogspot some things when you write(wt) about the experience in error correction activity and I agree whit(sp) you. The(nn) correcting through blogs is a very technological tool and your (sp)help(wt) me in(ww) identify my common mistakes when I write.Sincerely, Maira Figueroa V.
Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION WF= WRONG FORM.
A letter... Javiera.
Hello George:I (mw) write to you, because you are my Trainee Teacher and Simon,(p) has asked us (mw)make(ww) a feedback with each Trainee.The only thing I know is that you study English Pedagogy at Alberto Hurtado University in fourth year too, and you(sp) name is Jorge. But about you life and don’t know anything(wo). For example how is you(sp) life? Or what is(ww) you hobbies? Do you drink? ¿ what is your favourite drink? Do you have (mw)girlfriend? What is you age?(wf) I don’t know, you can tell me a lot of things about you. That is the idea.When you corrected my blog, you was(ww) very clear, you tell(wt) me what kind of wrongs(ww) I had and you suggest(wt) me a few of(nn) things that I need(wt). Thank you for that thing.In the error correction activity, you tell(wt) me only in(nn) a little comment, but you didn’t correct me(nn) my post. You don’t worry(wo).And so,(nn) thank you for all, and regards for you.Bye.
domingo 26 de octubre de 2008
A letter to you!!!! Maira.
George:I(wf) writing to(nn) you because Simon is a really creative person, so he thought in an activity: we write(wt) to our Trainee Teacher and ask (mw)some personal thinks(sp).Really(wo), he had reason(ww). I don’t know anything about you. I will(ww) like (mw)know you more. My first question is: Is George you really(ww) name? Are you translating Jorge? Well, I think that your name is Jorge but why (mw) you change it? ijiji How old are you? Do you have (mw) hobbies? Do you have girlfriend?About you carer(sp), I will (ww)be(nn) know how (mw)you decide (mw)study English Pedagogy? How is your experience in that carer(sp)?I read in your blogspot some things when you write(wt) about the experience in error correction activity and I agree whit(sp) you. The(nn) correcting through blogs is a very technological tool and your (sp)help(wt) me in(ww) identify my common mistakes when I write.Sincerely, Maira Figueroa V.
Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION WF= WRONG FORM.
Sunday, 16 November 2008
Error correction. Javiera and Maira.
Monday, 3 November 2008
My Photograph by Javiera.
The photograph that I like(wt) had(wt)takes(wt) it(ww) in(nn) this summer, in February when I was in(ww) my vacations with my family, a friend and my boyfriend. This photo show(wt) to my boyfriend (Alex) and me, it was really difficult (mw)took it, because Alex put the camera in a small branch of a tree with (mw) slope in the terrain and programmed the camera, and so he run to me in a few seconds. It was really funny! The place is called Lagoon El barco, (mw)a(ww) beautiful place very difficult to arrive(mw). In the photograph also(nn) you can see the lagoon, the Cordillera de los Andes, only a few meters (Argentina is really close(ww) to this place), and ancient beautiful(wo) trees called Araucarias, witch(sp) it(nn) lives with originals(sp) peoples(sp), the Pehuenches. I like this photograph because (mw) is a beautiful image, with green, blue, and a lot of colours,(p)which combined I like it(nn). Also because I’m with Alex, and he like(wt) it(nn) this photo too. He put the photograph in a photo frame in his bedroom and another (mw)in his office. All the people who see the photo in his office asked (mw) if the woman in the photo is his girlfriend (me).
domingo 9 de noviembre de 2008
A photograph I like by Maira.
I love the photography. I think than(ww) I will be photographer because this profession I like(wo) so(ww) much. I think all photos are important, because this(ww) represent one(ww) special moment.I have a lot(mw) favorites(sp) photos. I like my photos or than (nn)take(nn) other person(mw). But(nn) in this last time I like so much take pictures(wo)(mw) to my little niece. She(ww) name is Renata and she was(wt) one year old. I like (mw) take pictures to her because she is a very photogenic baby. She look(wt) very beautiful in all (mw)photos and she like(wt) so much when I take photos from(ww) her(wo).This photography was in our last September 18(mw). The place is Algarrobo, a beautiful beach nearly(sp) to Santiago. Renata is(wt) located(mw) specifically in a(ww) games located inside the enclosure where we are staying. All days in the afternoon we went whit(sp) her to this(ww) games because she played here and knew other babies too.In this photography, we can see your(ww) beautiful smile (always we(wo) look there, because she is very happy) and I choose this photography for this reason. Also, her smile shows her little white teeth and your(ww) eyes show very(ww) emotions.I hope than(ww) it(ww) photo like (mw)too!!
Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION
My Photograph by Javiera.
The photograph that I like(wt) had(wt)takes(wt) it(ww) in(nn) this summer, in February when I was in(ww) my vacations with my family, a friend and my boyfriend. This photo show(wt) to my boyfriend (Alex) and me, it was really difficult (mw)took it, because Alex put the camera in a small branch of a tree with (mw) slope in the terrain and programmed the camera, and so he run to me in a few seconds. It was really funny! The place is called Lagoon El barco, (mw)a(ww) beautiful place very difficult to arrive(mw). In the photograph also(nn) you can see the lagoon, the Cordillera de los Andes, only a few meters (Argentina is really close(ww) to this place), and ancient beautiful(wo) trees called Araucarias, witch(sp) it(nn) lives with originals(sp) peoples(sp), the Pehuenches. I like this photograph because (mw) is a beautiful image, with green, blue, and a lot of colours,(p)which combined I like it(nn). Also because I’m with Alex, and he like(wt) it(nn) this photo too. He put the photograph in a photo frame in his bedroom and another (mw)in his office. All the people who see the photo in his office asked (mw) if the woman in the photo is his girlfriend (me).
domingo 9 de noviembre de 2008
A photograph I like by Maira.
I love the photography. I think than(ww) I will be photographer because this profession I like(wo) so(ww) much. I think all photos are important, because this(ww) represent one(ww) special moment.I have a lot(mw) favorites(sp) photos. I like my photos or than (nn)take(nn) other person(mw). But(nn) in this last time I like so much take pictures(wo)(mw) to my little niece. She(ww) name is Renata and she was(wt) one year old. I like (mw) take pictures to her because she is a very photogenic baby. She look(wt) very beautiful in all (mw)photos and she like(wt) so much when I take photos from(ww) her(wo).This photography was in our last September 18(mw). The place is Algarrobo, a beautiful beach nearly(sp) to Santiago. Renata is(wt) located(mw) specifically in a(ww) games located inside the enclosure where we are staying. All days in the afternoon we went whit(sp) her to this(ww) games because she played here and knew other babies too.In this photography, we can see your(ww) beautiful smile (always we(wo) look there, because she is very happy) and I choose this photography for this reason. Also, her smile shows her little white teeth and your(ww) eyes show very(ww) emotions.I hope than(ww) it(ww) photo like (mw)too!!
Abbreviations: WW=WRONG WORD WT=WRONG TENSE WO=WRONG ORDER MW=MISSING WORD SP=SPELLING NN=NOT NEEDED P=PUNCTUATION
Wednesday, 5 November 2008
Error correction, by Jorge Ramos.
Wednesday, 16 April 2008
BBC Learning English
As a way of learning, BBC Learning English, represents a(ww) useful and complete website to be informed. At the same time, you can practice your English improving it, with a wide range of links.
This website has good exercises, I mean, reading, writing and listening exercises, which are a supportive way of improving(wp) your English level. Moreover, if you need to clarify some doubts you can find many solutions as a student and, at the same time, for teachers who are planning English classes.
BBC offers different options oriented to people who are avid of information. But this web site(sp) offers not only information, offers a(ww) clear and organized list of possibilities to acquire a better English level. I recommend you(wo) this website, check it on line.
.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/
Posted by George at 09:50:00 4 comments
BBC Learning English
As a way of learning, BBC Learning English, represents a(ww) useful and complete website to be informed. At the same time, you can practice your English improving it, with a wide range of links.
This website has good exercises, I mean, reading, writing and listening exercises, which are a supportive way of improving(wp) your English level. Moreover, if you need to clarify some doubts you can find many solutions as a student and, at the same time, for teachers who are planning English classes.
BBC offers different options oriented to people who are avid of information. But this web site(sp) offers not only information, offers a(ww) clear and organized list of possibilities to acquire a better English level. I recommend you(wo) this website, check it on line.
.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/
Posted by George at 09:50:00 4 comments
Thursday, 10 April 2008
Creativity, as a natural condition. By Sir Dreamer
Education has been the central stone in a pyramide called society. However, this stone has been eroded by many unnatural disasters. I mean, education has been affected by human concepts which are not oriented to promote creativity in the system.
As we all know, (mw)educational system is not generating opportunites to achieve our real interests, on the contrary, it has an objective, which is controlling(wt) and modelling(wt) our preferences, which are determine(wt) by natural conditions. That is the contradiction!! Can we ignore our abilities or skills in order to accept an external model which has nothing to do with our genetic skills? In my point of view(ww), we can not suffer the consequences of external charges, these affect our creativity and our free spirit.
Wednesday, 16 April 2008
BBC Learning English
As a way of learning, BBC Learning English, represents a useful and complete website to be informed. At the same time, you can practice your English improving it, with a wide range of links.This website has good exercises, I mean, reading, writing and listening exercises, which are a supportive way to improve your English level. Moreover, if you need to clarify some doubts you can find many solutions as a student and, at the same time, for teachers who are planning English classes.BBC offers different options oriented to people who are avid of information. But this website offers not only information, but a clear and organized list of possibilities to acquire a better English level. I recommend this website to you, check it on line..
http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/Posted by George at 09:50:00 4 comments
Thursday, 10 April 2008
Creativity, as a natural condition. By Sir Dreamer
BBC Learning English
As a way of learning, BBC Learning English, represents a useful and complete website to be informed. At the same time, you can practice your English improving it, with a wide range of links.This website has good exercises, I mean, reading, writing and listening exercises, which are a supportive way to improve your English level. Moreover, if you need to clarify some doubts you can find many solutions as a student and, at the same time, for teachers who are planning English classes.BBC offers different options oriented to people who are avid of information. But this website offers not only information, but a clear and organized list of possibilities to acquire a better English level. I recommend this website to you, check it on line..
http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/Posted by George at 09:50:00 4 comments
Thursday, 10 April 2008
Creativity, as a natural condition. By Sir Dreamer
Education has been the central stone in a pyramide called society. However, this stone has been eroded by many unnatural disasters. I mean, education has been affected by human concepts which are not oriented to promote creativity in the system. As we all know, the educational system is not generating opportunites to achieve our real interests, on the contrary, it has an objective, which is to control and model our preferences, which are determined by natural conditions. That is the contradiction!! Can we ignore our abilities or skills in order to accept an external model which has nothing to do with our genetic skills? From y point of view, we can not suffer the consequences of external charges, these affect our creativity and our free spirit.
Wednesday, 29 October 2008
Students´ error correction.
Abbreviations:
WW=WRONG WORD
WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
NN=NOT NEEDED
P=PUNCTUATION
martes 14 de octubre de 2008
Damn spring!!
Is allergy or flu? I don’t know really(wo), but I feel this from started by(wo)(ww) the damn spring!. Most people think than8ww) the spring is the best season of the year, but I disagree with theirs(ww), I hate the spring.What’s the reason? Ok, here is the argument:First:(p) the changeSp) of temperature. All days we don’t know how are the day: cold, cloudy or sunny. Also the meteorologists are very liars(sp), so they’re wrong with the forecasts and (mw)cause colds. I don’t know whether (mw)coat or not! Really bad =/Second: A lot of plants produce pollen that is spread (mw)everywhere. The air is infected by fluff and we breathe all day, causing sneeze after sneeze.Well…not all is bad. The birds sing and the horary change to the summer time is good. Otherwise good is the 16 October(wo) day. What’s happen(sp) that day? (mw)Is a really important date…..My birthday! =D
Thursday, 23 October 2008
Stoneheage...a great mistery!!!
Stonehenge is one of the prehistoric monuments that guards(ww) (mw)major mystery.
This work is a monument of ancient times, is an enormous mass of rocks, visibly tidy that is located in Great Britain, specifically near Amesbury in Wiltshir. This wonder of the world, set of rocks put of form circular(wo) and composed of wood, which until today does not allow to have a clear certainty of which it was the objetive8sp) of this work.
It is(ww) believed that Stonehenge was a center of worship where their purpose(sp) was to realize(ww) religious activities, others believe that this one was a sector led to a funereal(ww) temple, in alone(ww) where certain persons, (of major importance) were dismissed here.
Another theory suggest(sp9 that the aimwas(sp) rather astronomic, that is to say with this(wo)(nn) they realized celebrations for the summer solstice, where they could know since they would be the crops of every year, this according to what I have seen in National Geographic Channel or Discovery Channel.
The certain only thing(wo)(nn)of all this is that Stonehenge exceeds many architectural and astronomic current works, due to the mysticism, greatness and knowledge of the realized(ww) ones of this monument made for(nn) thousands of years ago.
martes 14 de octubre de 2008
My favorite piece of technology.
Well(p) my favorite piece technology is the labtop(sp), because (mw)is very important for the student of universities(wo) (in my case for example(wo)) and (mw)is a tool work(wt). I had my first ladtop(ww) two year(sp) ago, when my mother bought a labtop(sp) second hand(wo), but for my(ww) it was the best… I do(wt) not care the labtop was second hand(wo).I use(wt) the labtop(sp) In(p) my house, sometime(sp) I carry (mw)to (mw)universities and my mother use the labtop(sp) when she make(ww) your(ww) tesis(sp) of magister, and for last my father use(mw) only to check your(ww) email(sp).In my personal case(p) I use (mw)labtop(sp) every day because in my house (mw)is my computer, I do not have a desktop,(p) my little brother have the old desktop. Jajaja.I like many thing(nn) the my(ww) labtop(sp), I can listen(wt) my music in many place(sp), I have all (mw)pictures the(ww) my travels, I can work in the universities or in the house of my friend(wo) or classmate(sp), and I can connected(wt) to internet in any place.Mmm it is a difficult questions(sp) because this piece is my favorite (mw)about the(nn) technology, but I think that my life (mw)not changed (mw)much, my life would will(nn) be the same… but I(ww) was(ww9 arrange very much my time (wo).
WW=WRONG WORD
WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
NN=NOT NEEDED
P=PUNCTUATION
martes 14 de octubre de 2008
Damn spring!!
Is allergy or flu? I don’t know really(wo), but I feel this from started by(wo)(ww) the damn spring!. Most people think than8ww) the spring is the best season of the year, but I disagree with theirs(ww), I hate the spring.What’s the reason? Ok, here is the argument:First:(p) the changeSp) of temperature. All days we don’t know how are the day: cold, cloudy or sunny. Also the meteorologists are very liars(sp), so they’re wrong with the forecasts and (mw)cause colds. I don’t know whether (mw)coat or not! Really bad =/Second: A lot of plants produce pollen that is spread (mw)everywhere. The air is infected by fluff and we breathe all day, causing sneeze after sneeze.Well…not all is bad. The birds sing and the horary change to the summer time is good. Otherwise good is the 16 October(wo) day. What’s happen(sp) that day? (mw)Is a really important date…..My birthday! =D
Thursday, 23 October 2008
Stoneheage...a great mistery!!!
Stonehenge is one of the prehistoric monuments that guards(ww) (mw)major mystery.
This work is a monument of ancient times, is an enormous mass of rocks, visibly tidy that is located in Great Britain, specifically near Amesbury in Wiltshir. This wonder of the world, set of rocks put of form circular(wo) and composed of wood, which until today does not allow to have a clear certainty of which it was the objetive8sp) of this work.
It is(ww) believed that Stonehenge was a center of worship where their purpose(sp) was to realize(ww) religious activities, others believe that this one was a sector led to a funereal(ww) temple, in alone(ww) where certain persons, (of major importance) were dismissed here.
Another theory suggest(sp9 that the aimwas(sp) rather astronomic, that is to say with this(wo)(nn) they realized celebrations for the summer solstice, where they could know since they would be the crops of every year, this according to what I have seen in National Geographic Channel or Discovery Channel.
The certain only thing(wo)(nn)of all this is that Stonehenge exceeds many architectural and astronomic current works, due to the mysticism, greatness and knowledge of the realized(ww) ones of this monument made for(nn) thousands of years ago.
martes 14 de octubre de 2008
My favorite piece of technology.
Well(p) my favorite piece technology is the labtop(sp), because (mw)is very important for the student of universities(wo) (in my case for example(wo)) and (mw)is a tool work(wt). I had my first ladtop(ww) two year(sp) ago, when my mother bought a labtop(sp) second hand(wo), but for my(ww) it was the best… I do(wt) not care the labtop was second hand(wo).I use(wt) the labtop(sp) In(p) my house, sometime(sp) I carry (mw)to (mw)universities and my mother use the labtop(sp) when she make(ww) your(ww) tesis(sp) of magister, and for last my father use(mw) only to check your(ww) email(sp).In my personal case(p) I use (mw)labtop(sp) every day because in my house (mw)is my computer, I do not have a desktop,(p) my little brother have the old desktop. Jajaja.I like many thing(nn) the my(ww) labtop(sp), I can listen(wt) my music in many place(sp), I have all (mw)pictures the(ww) my travels, I can work in the universities or in the house of my friend(wo) or classmate(sp), and I can connected(wt) to internet in any place.Mmm it is a difficult questions(sp) because this piece is my favorite (mw)about the(nn) technology, but I think that my life (mw)not changed (mw)much, my life would will(nn) be the same… but I(ww) was(ww9 arrange very much my time (wo).
Thursday, 23 October 2008
Billy buried Kes......Now, he has New hopes.
Billy buried Kes. Suddenly, he felt that his life had to change.
When he faced his mother, all the feelings that he had hidden, appeared. He told her that she was absent, that all her life had been a constant chaos. He determined to left home and to explore the world that has been his real home. His brother had died in his mind. In fact, Billy had assumed that terrible situation, but he knew that Kes was living in his thoughts as a great friend and as a motivational element to face difficulties.
Billy grew up. He was eighteen, working in an old shoe factory that was dissapearing too. He wanted to train knaves, he wanted to share with those birds, he wanted to be free. At the end of the day, he came back to his house. His girl was waiting for him, with a great dinner. They were proud of themselves, they were happy.
One Sunday morning in the park, Billy and his girl were walking around, when something appeared in front of Billy. In the top of a tree, a beautiful, young and perfect knave was waiting for its prey. Billy look at it, and his mind travelled to his childhood. He understood that it was a great episode in his life, but at the same time, it was sad, depressing and enough. That was .....but now his life had to be with his girl and his new objective, his new little purpose, who was coming too. Now, he has new hopes.
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